Candy, candy all difrent treats. All sorts of things that you can eat. Edible paper and squeeze pops galore, I don't think I can eat anymore. But I must I thrust. Twizzlers, Lolipops, gumdrops, M&Ms, Crunch bars too! I hope you like the candy too
OK. Do you like candy? I think so! It made my mouth water! I really don't eat too much of it any more. Remember in your first comment to mention which of the poetic elements you used: simile, metaphor, sensory language, personification or irony. Maybe some sensory language with taste, smell and/or feel in your mouth as you're eating it?
You looked great on stage Friday night and YOU were smiling! Nice job! DC
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I did the same like in my first one
OK. Do you like candy? I think so! It made my mouth water! I really don't eat too much of it any more.
Remember in your first comment to mention which of the poetic elements you used: simile, metaphor, sensory language, personification or irony. Maybe some sensory language with taste, smell and/or feel in your mouth as you're eating it?
You looked great on stage Friday night and YOU were smiling! Nice job! DC
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