Love at first sight
But what can I say
I picked him up he was small and soft and wet in a way
Love at first sight but what can I say
First he crawled then he ran
At first he coudn't stand
He couldn't swim very well but he was independent on land
What can I say I've never felt this way
Since I've never had a dog until today
by D.G.
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Remember to make a comment on the poetic elements you may have used in your poetry. I'm glad you were writing about a dog! I'm not ready for you to grow up! When a student mentions love I always get nervous and yet I can see how you have all grown so much this year. I'll have to let go soon! DC
At First I thought it was about a Frog but then I realized that a dog makes more sense. That was a good poem I liked it.
thank you for commenting sidney lane
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